Edgar is of the quiet sort.
He's tight-lipped, wide-eyed and fairly short.
So how can one who's shy and lacks in height
Send people away in shock and fright?
Maybe its his red eyes, long horns and sharp teeth...
But no one sees what lies beneath.
Kai, is a rhyming beast. Just incase anyone was wandering<3 "Maybe its his red eyes, long horns and sharp teeth...
ReplyDeleteBut no one sees what lies beneath." my favorite part :D
I really love how you rhymed this piece, and how you talk about how frightened someone could be by him from the outside, but no one honestly knows what he could be like on the inside.
ReplyDeleteI like how this is saying that people can judge what's on the outside, when, on the inside, they can be really nice.
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy the way you see and understand everything in life. This piece or work has you written all over it!
ReplyDeletehello my lovely kai. i enjoy how naturally the rhyming comes with this piece. also, you like goats.
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